· The story was too complicated - incorporating a love interest would make the plot more perplexing to the target audience so we decided to take away this bit and solely concentrate on the issue of the main character's mental health.
· The character of Cornelius was appropriate for the psychological thriller as his psychological disorder made him more interesting
FEEDBACK DURING PRODUCTION
· The transition between the scenes of the character in the mental institute back to reality wasn't clear, so in order to fix this we put effects on the asylum scenes to make it obvious that it was an alternate state of reality that he was seeing throughout his premonition.
· The narration involving the newsreaders should be re-recorded in more professional voices to make it more realistic, as well as redrafting the script to make it obvious that the news reports were coming from all over the world by mentioning news stations such as the BBC and CNN. Whilst we managed to redraft the script, we were unable to re-record the voice overs due to time constraints.
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